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Alex

This is really an incredible story. It's really an entire novel packed into the short story format. Will read more of your stuff.

Cliff Hall

IMHO, this one would be an awesome candidate for expansion into a novel.

Melissa Miller

Haunting and intriguing. I'm thinking that there is a link between Christian's software development skills and writing. He manages to boil down a story to its essence, and isn't that what code-people strive to do? Elegance, that's what I hear all of the time from these people. This story is elegant. Now, on to the next one.

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